Writing 1 activity 2
describing my idol
process 4
The King of Dangdut
Rhoma Irama is the king of dangdut in Indonesia. He has become a singer since 70’s; at that time he made a band which is name Soneta around 1973. With Soneta band Rhoma Irama has got eleven Golden Records from his albums.
Actually his real name is Raden Irama and he was born in Tasikmalaya on December 11th 1946. Now he is 65 years old. He has tan skin with beard and side beard also he has short black curly hair with pointed nose.
from:http://www.rujakmanis.com
He is a good man because through his songs he wants to invite people to become good people, such as in “judi” song. In that song, he tries to tell everyone do not gambling anymore because it will make us become addicted and waste our money more and more.
His hobby is playing music, especially playing guitar. In other hand he really likes sing a song because he has good voice because of that he becomes a vocalist in his band and it is also the reason why he becomes famous star.
Rhoma Irama married with Ricca Rahim. He has four children, they are Debbie Veramasari, Fikri Zulfikar, Romy Syahrial and the youngest one is Ridho Rhoma. Actually he has two wives, the first one is Ricca Rahim and the next one is Angel Lelga but he has divorced with Angel Lelga and he does not have any children from Angel Lelga.
Rhoma irama is the best singer in Indonesia for me. He is good in singing, playing guitar, and being an actor. I can say that he is humble and a good man. So it is true if people in Indonesia chose him to become a king of dangdut.

Hi sabeeel,.
ReplyDeleteThanks to comment on my blog,..
I think your essay is good enough, but it's good to you to add more information about your Idol,..
And He's like you aaa,..
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I think that's all,..
Just keep writing,..
i like your essay...
ReplyDeletetry to describe more each paragraph...
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Your descriptive essay is good ...
ReplyDeleteBut i think you are not explaining more about your Idol ..
My suggest is add more paragraph and main Idea ...
In the Other hand , you wrote down "He has tan skin with beard and side beard also he has short black curly hair with pointed nose" in paragraph 1 ..
It is better for you to separate it in other paragraph ...
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Hi sabil,
ReplyDeletethanks for your comment on my blog.
I agree with Aan.
In paragraph 1 you write two ideas.
I think you should separated it.
that's all from me.
Tq. :)
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ReplyDeleteyour idol same with me........
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but check all of your sentences.....
hi sabiiil,
ReplyDeleteI think your essay is good enough, but it's good to you to add more information about your Idol .
but, I donot like your idol .
please pay attention with your grammar :)
that's all from me .
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