Writing 1 activity 3
describing my self
process 2
Me and My Life
My parents gave “Muhammad Sabil” as my name when I was born but people just call me Sabil. Now I am 18 years old because I was born on January 13th 1993. I come from Pariaman but I live, study, and stay in Padang with my family. I live in Rambai street number 10A Purus Baru and I have been living there since I was born.
I am good looking at all. I have pointed nose and black eyes with thick eyebrows, beside that I also have short black curly hair. Same with my grandfather, I have tan skin with medium weight and average tall. I have dimples in my cheek which make me more handsome.
When I was a child, I went to elementary school 23. It is near from my house and I like that time when I studied there because I played all the time with my friends. I studied there for six years before I continued to junior high school. After I graduated from elementary school I went to junior high School 2, it is near the central market in Padang.
I like when I was in junior high school because I had many new friends. I studied new subjects different with elementary school. The best part is when I was in third grade, my class made a drama in the end of semester and all of teachers and parents watched us. After I graduated from junior high school I went to senior high school 3 in Gunung Pangilun. I like in senior high school because I found my first love there, she is very interesting girl for me. That is make I love my time in senior high school.
My hobbies are playing basketball, go swimming, go jogging and reading novels. I like playing basketball because I want to be tall boy. I have never get in to a basketball team because playing basketball is just something I do in my free time. I like go swimming because I want to be able to swim and maybe I can save someone whose going to sink.
I like go jogging because it is the simple exercise. I can do it in my free time especially in weekend. I like go jogging to GOR H. Agus Salim, it is not far from my house. The last one is reading novels. It is my favourite because I can go everywhere that I want without have to go to that place, I can do it with my imagination.
Many people said that I am a quiet man. Maybe it is because I just talk important things, if there is not important I choose to be silent. When I was a kid, I used to be mess person but now I am try to be neat person because I do not want troubled my mom anymore.
That is all about my self, I just want to be great person in the next day. All I have done will become a lesson in my life to make me become a better person than now. You can take the good part from me to make you better and you can throw away the bad part from me, just consider it as a lesson for you.

sabil,.
ReplyDeleteyour paragraph is good ,..
but i think paragraph 2 and 3 are the same idea, so make its be 1 paragraph...
keep writing...
:))
hey sabil...why you choose the title with "me and my self"?
ReplyDeleteit is same meaning,right?
it is better to make space in each paragraph..
i think paragraph 3 and 5 have same idea about your hobbies and your activities.
why do you looks like "SC" in those picture bil?
ReplyDeleteis it true?
hahahahaha
check your essay again....
sabil,
ReplyDeleteyour essay is good enough .
I am interested about it .
but the photos you like a shy person, right !
that's all from me .
hai sabilll...
ReplyDeleteyour essay is good,,
but please attention in your space, because there are something wrong.. hehhehe
:)
keep writing
thanks guys...
ReplyDeleteI'm very appreciated with your comment...
for caca: I wrote "me and my life" not "me and my self"
but thanks all....
very3x much...
Sabil,
ReplyDeleteYour essay is very good..
But let see in paragraph 1 line 2, you write "Now I am 18 years old..." I think it's be better for you if you don't write "now" because from to be "am" people know that it's now.
that's all from me.
thank you.
keep writing. :)