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Tuesday, May 24, 2011

contrast and comparison essay

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comparison and contrast essay
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Shopping in Supermarket or in Traditional market

Shopping is an important thing to do because if you want to buy something you have to go shopping. People usually find the best place for shopping, such as in the supermarket or in the traditional market. Both places offer different things to people who want to go shopping. That is why in this essay I will discuss about the commodities, the environment and the selling system between supermarket and traditional market.
First, I am going to discuss about supermarket. The tree aspects that I am going to discuss are commodities, environment and selling system. Commodities that sell in supermarket are more luxurious than in traditional market such as furniture, cosmetics and suits. The foods are also more expensive in supermarket than in traditional market because those are in packet. After the commodities, we will talk about the environment. In supermarket the air is cool because of the air conditioner; it is also clean and smells good. Beside that, in supermarket the selling system is with the fixed price. So we can not bargain the price.
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Second, I am going to discuss about traditional market. The three aspects that I am going to discuss are commodities, environment and selling system. Actually, we can find many things in traditional market because the commodities are various kinds such as fruits, fish, shoes, fineries, clothes and these are also cheaper than in supermarket. The environment is not very good; sometimes it is muddy and dirty whenever it is rain. Bargain is one of the best things from traditional market because we can bargain the thing that we want to buy. Because of that, I think the selling system in traditional market better than in supermarket.
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So, whenever you want to go shopping it must be have advantages and disadvantages. It depends on you and your amount money. If you have much money and want shopping in nice place you can go to supermarket. In the other hand, if you do not have much money you can go to traditional market because you can bargain there. However, both places is the best place to go shopping.

7 comments:

  1. this is a good essay..
    because you give some information that contrast each other..
    thank you :)

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  2. it is a good essay...
    be careful of your word...
    "The tree aspects that I am going to discuss are commodities, environment and selling system."
    it is "three", not "tree"

    thanks...
    and please comment my other posting tonight...

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  3. your mistakes
    "The tree aspects"
    you should give space in your paragraph

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  4. sabil,

    I think your essay is good enough .

    because you give more information in your essay .

    be carefully with your word :)

    that's all from me .

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  5. I think your essay is good and I have corrected it,.


    So far so good,.
    Just keep writing,.
    :)

    Do not forget to put your comment on my blog,.
    Thanks,.

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  6. Sabil,
    Your essay is good...
    But let see in paragraph 2 line 1, you write "three" with a wrong spelling. In your essay your write it "tree".

    That's all from me.
    Thank you.
    Keep writing. :)

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